Love the addition of the hat. Also the difference of heel arch between mother and daughter was a surprising variation. One that makes sense, like the fact the mother has pearls, the daughter does not (of course, with the school uniform, even if allowed, she wouldn't have them on). You consistently include all those little details about women for that air femininity that adds more credibility to such damsels being damsels in distress.
I will admit, when I first saw the picture before I read the story, the masked man looked young enough that I thought this was a mother-daughter bound in a tie-up game.